HW 31 - Comments 3

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Christian
-Your connections to your perspective on illness and dying and living with a disease to your cousins perspective + Morrie's perspective were really great. The connections brought me in to a world where i live with a life-threatening disease and made me think how i would live and take care of myself. It is clear that you attacked this idea from all angles and your insight on this topic is clear.

Great post

Dean

-The alignment with assignment was a little off here, but you still made it clear enough for me to know what your main idea was. Your chart was a good way to back up your argument although i don't think you needed to include the information from the chart in your last paragraph. Instead, you could have expanded more on other surgeries compared to the U.S and other nations. I still enjoyed your post and have gained more insight on the subject since my subject was very similar.

Great post

Max

-Your post was very insightful and gave a clear understanding of your topic. I found it interesting that the average life expectancy of a person living with aids to be 24 years. As you stated, that seems like a good amount of time to be living with what is considered a horrible disease. Your perspective on illness and dying was present throughout the post and was a good way to connect back to your initial point.

Great post

Alex

-Your approach to this post was very different and interesting. I like how you went in to depth of how the topic of suicide can be separated in to two parts: mentally and physically. Your paragraph on the before and after of the situation painted a vivid picture in my head. You went in to further detail on the possible cause of this attempted suicide before you knew the girls intentions which was insightful. Besides the post connecting more to the assignment, it was very good.

Great post